[PHP-DOC] cvs: phpdoc /en/functions mysql.xml From: Daniel Beckham (danbeck <email protected>)
Date: 08/02/00

danbeck Wed Aug 2 08:15:29 2000 EDT

  Modified files:
    /phpdoc/en/functions mysql.xml
  Log:
  grammatical changes and clarification, misc asthetic changes
  
Index: phpdoc/en/functions/mysql.xml
diff -u phpdoc/en/functions/mysql.xml:1.17 phpdoc/en/functions/mysql.xml:1.18
--- phpdoc/en/functions/mysql.xml:1.17 Wed Aug 2 07:48:14 2000
+++ phpdoc/en/functions/mysql.xml Wed Aug 2 08:15:29 2000
@@ -63,7 +63,7 @@
    <refnamediv>
     <refname>mysql_change_user</refname>
     <refpurpose>
- Change logged in user on active connection
+ Change logged in user of the active connection
     </refpurpose>
    </refnamediv>
    <refsect1>
@@ -87,11 +87,11 @@
     </funcsynopsis>
     <para>
      <function>mysql_change_user</function> changes the logged in user
- on the current active connection, or, if specified on the
- connection given by the link identifier. If a database is
+ of the current active connection, or the connection given by the
+ optional parameter link_identifier. If a database is
      specified, this will default or current database after the user
- has been changed. If the new user/password combination fails to
- be authorized the current connected user stays active.</para>
+ has been changed. If the new user and password authorization fails,
+ the current connected user stays active.</para>
      <note><para>This function was introduced in PHP 3.0.13 and
      requires MySQL 3.23.3 or higher.
     </para></note>
@@ -101,7 +101,7 @@
   <refentry id="function.mysql-close">
    <refnamediv>
     <refname>mysql_close</refname>
- <refpurpose>close MySQL connection</refpurpose>
+ <refpurpose>Close MySQL connection</refpurpose>
    </refnamediv>
    <refsect1>
     <title>Description</title>
@@ -350,7 +350,7 @@
   <refentry id="function.mysql-db-query">
    <refnamediv>
     <refname>mysql_db_query</refname>
- <refpurpose>Send an MySQL query to MySQL</refpurpose>
+ <refpurpose>Send a MySQL query</refpurpose>
    </refnamediv>
    <refsect1>
     <title>Description</title>
@@ -424,7 +424,7 @@
   <refentry id="function.mysql-errno">
    <refnamediv>
     <refname>mysql_errno</refname>
- <refpurpose>Returns the number of the error message from previous
+ <refpurpose>Returns the numerical value of the error message from previous
      MySQL operation</refpurpose>
    </refnamediv>
    <refsect1>
@@ -1101,7 +1101,7 @@
    <refnamediv>
     <refname>mysql_list_dbs</refname>
     <refpurpose>
- List databases available on on MySQL server
+ List databases available on a MySQL server
     </refpurpose>
    </refnamediv>
    <refsect1>
@@ -1342,7 +1342,7 @@
   <refentry id="function.mysql-query">
    <refnamediv>
     <refname>mysql_query</refname>
- <refpurpose>Send an SQL query to MySQL</refpurpose>
+ <refpurpose>Send a MySQL query</refpurpose>
    </refnamediv>
    <refsect1>
     <title>Description</title>